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Vampire Nights

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Laying in the dark cold of night
Waiting for my kind to join me here
Waiting for my time to take flight
And drink the sweet red blood laced with fear

My vampire nights are filled with horror
The kind that sends shivers through your body
Ripping flesh drinking blood, making love
Reaching out through your fears so strong so boldly

Wanting to embrace every sense every feeling
Seducing you with my beauty of the night
Pale white skin and eyes of fire
Breasts against your body as I'm holding you tight

I draw your minds so easy with desire
The human mind is such a fool for lust
Wanting all that sets your groin on fire
With my beauty unclothed you give such trust

Then is my time to play to extinguish your light
To hold your twisting body oh how you can't fight

Sending sensations of glory from my mouth to my brain
For a mere mortal this feeling would send you insane

When you're cold on the ground I look down with empty thought
Of that waste of that beauty you once held high
But you couldn't refrain from urges of desire and got caught
Now I leave you a dead shell as I retreat back to the sky.
Feel free to NOTE me on any grammar or spelling mistakes.
I am always willing to learn. .
Ran through spell check as my spelling is not so good.
I'm quite proud of this one :)
Please don't download my work or re use as your own.
© 2012 - 2024 Melanie-H-H
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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this was very good,but i think you need more substance of emotion when you write you relay your thoughts,but not your emotions. poems relay your feelings and thoughts like any literature,so when you write what are you trying to relay?,what is the ultimate point of the story? what are my readers suppose to gather from this? are the things you should have down before you write. If you have a good thought on the feeling and point to the project this will better help the substance in the emotional flow of the poem. but believe me it was good really!